"— I think volunteering abroad is great because you can learn and to help people," said Mary. The program was…

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"— I think volunteering abroad is great because you can learn and to help people," said Mary. The program was three months long. She went to Peru, she helped build houses and teaching children English. She said, "it was hard but the children were so happy." Mary recommend to other students to volunteer if they have time and money. She also gain new friends and improved her language skills. Overall, she feel proud of what she did and want others to try the same experience." Analise o texto-base e identifique the version that best reconstructs the paragraph for clear and correct publication.

1. A) Volunteering abroad offers many benefits: you can learn new skills, help local communities, improve your language skills, and make lasting friendships. Mary spent three months in Peru, where she helped build houses and teach English to children. She found the work hard but rewarding and encourages other students to volunteer if they have time and resources.
2. B) In her three-month program in Peru, Mary was able to help building houses and teaching English to children. She learn new skills and made friends but said it was hard. Mary recommend volunteering abroad to students with time and money because it was a great experience.
3. C) Mary’s experience volunteering abroad was an unforgettable journey. Over three months in Peru, she built houses and taught English, improving her language skills and gaining friends. She found the work challenging but saw the children’s joy and now encourages any student who has resources to volunteer and make a positive impact.
4. D) Mary said that she think volunteering abroad is a great idea because it help people and you learn a lot. During her three-month program in Peru, she build houses and teach English. It was hard but children were happy. She gain friends, improve her skills and recommend it to students who have time and money.
5. E) The three-month volunteering program in Peru helped Mary learn and grow. She built houses, taught English, improved her language skills, and gained friends. Mary said it was hard but the children’s happiness made it worthwhile. She recommends that students with time and money should consider volunteering abroad.

✅ Resposta correta: alternativa A

Resolução passo a passo

1. O texto-base tem vários erros de gramática e de concordância: 'you can learn and to help', 'Mary recommend', 'She also gain', 'she feel', 'want others', 'teaching children' e 'she helped build houses and teaching'. A tarefa é reescrever o parágrafo de forma clara e correta, sem perder as informações do original. Passo 2: A alternativa A reúne as informações essenciais: os benefícios de voluntariar no exterior (aprender, ajudar as pessoas, melhorar o idioma e fazer amizades), os três meses no Peru, a construção de casas, o ensino de inglês para crianças, a dificuldade da experiência, a alegria das crianças (traduzida como 'rewarding') e a recomendação a estudantes com tempo e recursos. Passo 3: A gramática de A está correta: 'offers', 'helped', 'found', 'encourages' e as construções paralelas com 'and' estão adequadas. Passo 4: Por que as outras estão erradas: B tem 'help building', 'She learn' e 'Mary recommend', além de omitir a alegria das crianças. C é gramaticalmente correta, mas acrescenta 'unforgettable' e 'make a positive impact', que não aparecem no original, e troca o sentido de 'time and money' por 'resources'. D repete vários erros: 'that she think', 'it help', 'she build', 'teach' e 'she gain'. E é gramaticalmente correta, mas omite a ideia de ajudar as pessoas, que é o motivo central defendido por Mary no original. Passo 5: Conclusão: a alternativa A é a única que mantém a fidelidade ao conteúdo e à gramática, por isso é a versão mais adequada para publicação. O gabarito oficial está correto.

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