Edit the short paragraph below to improve cohesion by inserting appropriate linking words that indicate…

Questão

Edit the short paragraph below to improve cohesion by inserting appropriate linking words that indicate addition, condition, opposition, contrast, conclusion, or synthesis. Keep the original meaning and write a revised version in English (120–180 words). Paragraph to edit: "I enjoy volunteering at the community center. I teach English to adults. Some weeks it is busy. Others there are few students. I try new activities. Sometimes they work well. Sometimes they do not. The experience is rewarding."

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Resposta esperada

I enjoy volunteering at the community center because I teach English to adults and, moreover, I learn a lot from my students. Although some weeks are busy while others have few learners, I consistently try new activities to keep lessons engaging. When an activity works well, students participate enthusiastically and show clear progress; when it does not, I reflect on what went wrong and adapt my plans accordingly. In addition to teaching, I help coordinate materials and community events, which further supports learners and strengthens local ties. If I continue developing varied materials and asking for feedback, I will improve my lessons and better meet students’ needs. Ultimately, the experience is rewarding and has strengthened both my teaching skills and my commitment to the community.

Explicação

A revisão do parágrafo original aprimora a coesão ao utilizar palavras de ligação que estabelecem relações claras entre as ideias, como causa e efeito, contraste e adição. Isso não apenas facilita a compreensão do texto, mas também enriquece a narrativa, tornando-a mais fluida e envolvente. Além disso, a inclusão de reflexões e ações futuras demonstra um desenvolvimento contínuo do autor, o que contribui para uma apresentação mais completa da experiência de voluntariado.

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