I wrote a draft about my visit to the school library last Friday. "I really excited about visit the library…

Questão

I wrote a draft about my visit to the school library last Friday. "I really excited about visit the library because there was many shelves with interesting books and I hoped to find some fun stories to read with my friends." Next, I browsed the history section and took notes on local events. Then I spoke with the librarian to get reading suggestions. To finish, I returned home and summarized the highlights of the day. Analyze the text and identify which revision of the quoted sentence enhances clarity and coherence without changing the original meaning.

1. A) I was really excited to visit the library because there were many shelves with interesting books and I hoped to find some fun stories to read with my friends.
2. B) I really excited to visit the library because there were many shelves with interesting books and I hoped to find some fun stories to read with my friends.
3. C) I was really excited to visit the library because there are many shelves with interesting books and I hoped to find some fun stories to read with my friends.
4. D) I was really excited visiting the library because there were many shelves with interesting books and I hoped to find some fun stories to read with my friends.
5. E) I really was excited about visiting the library because there were many shelves of interesting books and I hoped to find some fun stories to read with my friends.

✅ Resposta correta: alternativa A

Resolução passo a passo

1. Leia o trecho original e identifique os problemas: "I really excited about visit the library" falta o verbo to be no passado (was) e a forma correta após about seria visiting, ou a estrutura excited to visit; "there was many shelves" tem concordância errada, pois shelves é plural e pede were. Passo 2: Como o texto narra fatos do passado (last Friday, hoped, browsed, spoke), todas as partes da frase devem estar no passado. Passo 3: A alternativa A corrige os dois problemas de forma natural: I was really excited to visit (sujeito, verbo to be no passado e infinitivo com to, mantendo o sentido de estar animado para visitar), e there were many shelves (concordância com o plural). Ela também mantém with interesting books, preservando o sentido original. Passo 4: Por que as outras estão erradas: B mantém o erro de falta do verbo was; C muda o tempo verbal para there are, o que quebra a coerência com o passado do texto; D continua com a construção agramatical excited visiting, sem a preposição ou o infinitivo necessário; E está gramaticalmente correta e tem sentido equivalente, mas a inversão I really was excited about visiting e a troca de with por of deixam a frase menos natural, então não é a revisão que mais melhora a clareza e a coerência. Passo 5: Conclusão: o gabarito A está correto.

💡 Dica: Leia atentamente a frase e identifique a forma correta do verbo e preposições para clareza.

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