Nearly 70% of Lincoln Middle School students participate in after-school clubs, but the second paragraph of…

Questão

Nearly 70% of Lincoln Middle School students participate in after-school clubs, but the second paragraph of the school newsletter draft needs improvement. First paragraph: At Lincoln Middle School, after-school clubs offer students diverse opportunities. Activities include art, drama, robotics and environmental projects. Second paragraph (draft): We have many students that attend the clubs they like. They likes art and drama. They also likes build robots with their friends. The environmental project, it help them learn about nature and how protect it. Reconstruct the second paragraph to improve clarity, coherence, and grammatical correctness for final publication.

1. A) Many students attend their preferred clubs and enjoy art, drama and robotics. The environmental project helps students learn about nature.
2. B) Many students attend clubs of their choice. They enjoy art and drama, build computers with friends, and the environmental project helps them learn how to protect nature.
3. C) Many students attend their preferred clubs, they enjoy art and drama, they also like to build robots with friends, and the environmental project help them learn about nature and protect it.
4. D) The clubs preferred by many students are art, drama and robotics, and the environmental project by students is to learn about protecting nature.
5. E) Many students attend their preferred clubs. They enjoy art and drama, and they also build robots with friends. The environmental project helps them learn about nature and how to protect it.

✅ Resposta correta: alternativa E

Resolução passo a passo

1. Identifique os problemas do rascunho: concordância ("students that attend" e "They likes"), uso de "build" sem "to" depois de "also build" ou "like to build", "The environmental project, it help them" (sujeito repetido e verbo sem concordância com "it") e a falta de clareza em "how protect it". Passo 2: Verifique se a versão final mantém todas as informações do rascunho: alunos frequentam clubes de sua preferência, gostam de arte e teatro, constroem robôs com amigos e o projeto ambiental ensina sobre a natureza e como protegê-la. Passo 3: A alternativa E cumpre tudo: "Many students attend their preferred clubs" corrige a concordância e a redundância; "They enjoy art and drama, and they also build robots with friends" organiza as atividades em uma frase coordenada correta; "The environmental project helps them learn about nature and how to protect it" usa o verbo na terceira pessoa do singular e completa a ideia com "how to protect it". Passo 4: Por que as outras estão erradas: A omite a parte sobre proteger a natureza e não menciona a construção de robôs com amigos. B troca robôs por "computers", o que altera o conteúdo do texto original. C mantém erros: junta frases com vírgulas (comma splice) e usa "project help" sem concordância. D fica confusa e gramaticalmente truncada, com "the environmental project by students is to learn", que não expressa com clareza a função do projeto. Passo 5: Conclusão: a alternativa E é a única que é gramaticalmente correta, coerente e fiel ao conteúdo do rascunho, por isso é a melhor reconstrução para publicação.

💡 Dica: Reescreva o parágrafo corrigindo erros gramaticais e melhorando a coerência.

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