Near the entrance of the town library, a digital board will display a notice written by two teenagers. Their…

Questão

Near the entrance of the town library, a digital board will display a notice written by two teenagers. Their draft says: “Our reading workshop happen on Saturday. It is for every residents. Bring a book. Bring your favourite book.” Before publication, the librarian leaves three notes: correct verb and noun forms; join ideas that repeat; keep the original information. The notice must remain friendly and clear because families will read it quickly on their phones. The library has not defined a starting time, and participants may choose any book they want to discuss. Analyze the draft and the librarian’s notes. Identify the revised notice that is ready for publication.

1. A) The reading workshop happens on Saturday, welcomes every resident, and asks participants to bring a favourite book.
2. B) The reading workshop happen on Saturday, welcomes every residents, and asks participants to bring a favourite book.
3. C) The reading workshop happens on Saturday, welcomes only residents with books, and asks participants to bring a favourite book.
4. D) The reading workshop happens on Sunday, welcomes every resident, and asks participants to bring a favourite book.
5. E) The reading workshop happens on Saturday, welcomes every resident, and asks participants to bring two books.

✅ Resposta correta: alternativa A

Resolução passo a passo

1. Identifique as informações originais do rascunho: a oficina de leitura acontece no sábado, é para todos os moradores, e os participantes devem trazer seu livro favorito. O rascunho tem erros de concordância verbal ("happen" deveria ser "happens", pois o sujeito "workshop" está no singular) e de concordância nominal ("every residents" deveria ser "every resident", pois "every" pede substantivo no singular).
2. Aplique as três notas da bibliotecária. Corrija as formas verbais e nominais: "happens" e "every resident". Junte as ideias repetidas: as frases "Bring a book. Bring your favourite book." repetem o pedido de trazer livro, então podem ser unidas em "asks participants to bring a favourite book". Mantenha a informação original: sábado, todos os moradores, livro favorito.
3. Verifique a alternativa A: "The reading workshop happens on Saturday, welcomes every resident, and asks participants to bring a favourite book." Ela corrige a concordância verbal e nominal, une as ideias repetidas em uma única frase e preserva todas as informações originais. Está correta e é clara para leitura rápida no celular.
4. Por que as outras estão erradas. B mantém "happen" e "residents", ou seja, não corrige os erros gramaticais. C muda o público para "only residents with books", inventando uma restrição que não existe no rascunho. D troca o dia de sábado para domingo, alterando a informação original. E muda "a favourite book" para "two books", alterando o pedido original e inventando uma exigência não prevista.
5. Observação sobre o enunciado: o texto informa que a biblioteca não definiu horário de início, então nenhuma alternativa deve inventar um horário, o que A respeita.

💡 Dica: Revise erros gramaticais e simplifique ideias repetidas mantendo o tom amigável.

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