Draft paragraph of a student blog: Recycling is good for the planet. We should all do it. It reduces waste and…

Questão

Draft paragraph of a student blog: Recycling is good for the planet. We should all do it. It reduces waste and saves resources. I think people don’t recycle because they find it difficult. Many towns have programs to help. For example, in Green City, bins are easy to use. Analise the draft in the text and identify which alternative best reconstructs the paragraph to improve coherence and flow.

1. A) Recycling reduces waste and saves resources, making it a good practice for the planet. However, many people find recycling difficult and do not do it. To address this issue, several towns have programs to help citizens, such as Green City, where recycling bins are conveniently placed and easy to use.
2. B) Recycling is good for the planet and reduces waste and saves resources, but many people don’t recycle because they find it difficult. For example, Green City has an easy-to-use bin program to help residents.
3. C) Recycling reduces waste and saves resources. Recycling is good for the planet. Many people don’t recycle because they find it difficult. Green City provides easy-to-use bins as part of a town program to help.
4. D) Recycling reduces waste and saves resources, making it good for the planet. Many towns have programs to help, for example, Green City’s bins are easy to use, but people don’t recycle because they find it difficult.
5. E) Recycling is good for the planet, and we should all do it since it reduces waste and saves resources. Many people don’t recycle because they find it difficult, but some towns offer programs to make it easier.

✅ Resposta correta: alternativa A

Resolução passo a passo

1. O rascunho contém ideias corretas, mas as frases são curtas e soltas. A vantagem da reciclagem, a dificuldade das pessoas e o exemplo de Green City não se conectam entre si. Passo 2: A alternativa A organiza essas ideias em uma ordem lógica. Começa pelos benefícios (reduz o desperdício e economiza recursos, tornando a prática boa para o planeta), introduz o problema com o conector However, que marca contraste, e termina com a solução, mostrando programas das cidades e usando Green City como exemplo específico. Passo 3: Todas as informações do rascunho permanecem, e os conectores (However, To address this issue, such as) criam a fluidez pedida. Passo 4: Por que as outras estão erradas: B junta muitas ideias em uma frase longa e transforma os programas gerais das cidades em apenas um exemplo. C repete ideias, deixa frases curtas e sem conectores, e a afirmação sobre o planeta aparece depois dos benefícios, sem ligação. D mistura o exemplo de Green City com a dificuldade por meio de vírgulas, sem marcar contraste, e a frase final fica confusa. E é coerente, mas omite o exemplo de Green City e troca a informação sobre as cidades por uma afirmação vaga com some towns. Conclusão: A é a melhor reconstrução, e o gabarito oficial está correto.

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