Have you ever seen a place that brings everyone in a neighborhood together? The community garden is a place…

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Have you ever seen a place that brings everyone in a neighborhood together? The community garden is a place where people from all around the neighborhood can come together and grow vegetables and plants. It is a very important place because it allows local residents to grow their own vegetables and also meet and talk to each other. The garden has been there for three years and it has helped to improve relationships among neighbors. Analise the draft paragraph and identify the version that best reconstructs it for final publication, ensuring conciseness and clarity?

1. A) The garden, where people grow plants and vegetables, has helped to improve relationships among neighbors.
2. B) For three years, the community garden has been an important place for growing vegetables and meeting.
3. C) The community garden is a place where locals can grow vegetables and meet each other.
4. D) Established three years ago, the community garden brings neighbors together to grow vegetables and strengthen relationships.
5. E) The community garden has existed for three years and allows local residents to grow their own vegetables and to meet and talk.

✅ Resposta correta: alternativa D

Resolução passo a passo

1. O rascunho traz quatro ideias centrais: a horta comunitária reúne vizinhos, serve para cultivar vegetais e plantas, existe há três anos e melhora as relações entre os vizinhos. Uma versão final precisa manter essas ideias de forma concisa e clara. Passo 2: A alternativa D resume todas elas em uma frase curta: 'Established three years ago' traz o tempo de existência, 'brings neighbors together' retoma a ideia de união, 'to grow vegetables' mantém a função do espaço e 'strengthen relationships' expressa a melhora das relações. Passo 3: A alternativa A é incompleta, porque omite o encontro e a conversa entre os moradores e não menciona o tempo de existência. Passo 4: A alternativa B omite o papel de aproximar os vizinhos e a melhora das relações, e a expressão 'an important place' é vaga. Passo 5: A alternativa C é clara e concisa, mas deixa de fora o tempo de existência e a melhora nas relações entre vizinhos. Passo 6: A alternativa E é fiel ao texto original, porém é mais longa e repetitiva, pois usa duas estruturas verbais ('allows ... to grow' e 'to meet and talk'), o que contraria a exigência de concisão. Conclusão: a alternativa D é a que melhor reconstrói o parágrafo para publicação, pois cumpre concisão e clareza sem perder informações essenciais.

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